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Showing vs. Telling - How to Use Both

Instructor: Misa Ramirez. The difference between a story that shows verses a story that tells is a book people love to read verses a story people put down.  Is your story engaging?  Does it grab people’s attention?  Does is suck readers into the story, refusing to let them go? 

If it does, you’ve created a visceral response in your reader.  You’ve SHOWN your story. 

If not, your story is likely relying on telling instead of showing, removing your character from the action, and your reader from the story.  

Participants will analyze telling verses showing scenes, will rework them, and will identify telling scenes in their own WIP, reworking them into showing scenes.  This is an interactive workshop and participation is key!

WHEN:    Oct 15, 2012 - Nov 11, 2012

COST:   $15 for Premium Members
$25 for Basic Members

Cancellation policy: Registrations are non-refundable except when the workshop is cancelled by Savvy Authors.

REGISTRATION:      *** Registration Closed***

INSTRUCTOR:   
Misa Ramirez is the author of the Lola Cruz mystery series: Living the Vida Lola (January ’09) and Hasta la Vista, Lola! (2010) from Thomas Dunne Books / St. Martin’s Minotaur. Her new cozy mystery series will be out with NAL in fall 2011, published under the name Melissa Bourbon.  

A former middle and high school teacher, this blonde-haired, green-eyed, proud to be Latina-by-Marriage girl loves following Lola and Harlow, her two sleuths, on their many adventures. Whether it’s contemplating belly button piercings or visiting nudist resorts, she’s always up for the challenge. Misa/Melissa also has two middle grade series for girls in development, is published in Woman’s World Magazine and Romance Writers Report, and has a children’s book published.

Tags:    Craft, Intermediate





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