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Edit the Life Back Into Your Story: Hands-On Techniques for Creating Emot

Instructor: Lynn Johnson. You started out with a great premise, larger-than-life characters, and a fast-paced plot.  Your walls are plastered with goal-motivation-conflict charts and you could recite each character's internal and external arcs in your sleep.  Maybe you even came up with a detailed outline before you started writing your latest masterpiece.

But now that it's time to edit your rough draft, you realize your characters' emotions and personalities didn't make it onto the page, and the scenes that were so vivid in your head seem flat or rushed on paper.  What went wrong?

Nothing, actually.  First drafts are for getting the basic story nailed down.  Revision is where you crank up the voltage and get the emotions right.

This workshop focuses on practical techniques to help you edit the spark back into your story.  Topics covered include:

* Why stimulus-response chains can make or break a scene, and how to use them for maximum dramatic effect

* How to fine-tune the progression of emotion in a scene

* Techniques for infusing the POV character's personality and worldview into each scene

* How to streamline exposition and make infodumps do double-duty as characterization

* Why descriptions are inherently boring, and how you can make them compelling

* How to write narrative summary that your readers won't be tempted to skim

* How to recognize and eliminate author intrusion

* How to make sure your characters emotions and personality make it onto the page

At the end of the workshop, you'll have an editing checklist that guides you through the process of transforming your rough draft into the exciting, dynamic story you originally envisioned.

(Schedule includes a break over Thanksgiving)

WHEN:    Nov 26, 2012 - Dec 23, 2012

COST:   $15 for Premium Members
$25 for Basic Members

Cancellation policy: Registrations are non-refundable except when the workshop is cancelled by Savvy Authors.

REGISTRATION:      *** Registration Closed***

INSTRUCTOR:   
When she's not writing science fiction, fantasy, and paranormal romance, Lynn Johnston blogs about how to take control of your life ten minutes at a time using the kaizen approach: http://www.smallstepstobigchange.com

She’s the author of The Kaizen Plan For Organized Authors: Take Control of Your Writing Career 10 Minutes at a Time (www.smallstepsforwriters.com).

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