• Dawn McClure

        Published: April 30th, 2012  Views: 802 
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    Becoming an author is easier than ever these days, thanks to ebooks and online self-publishing services. It's now possible to complete a manuscript and, for example, pop it onto Amazon as an ebook within 24 hours – or less.

    Becoming a professional author remains as hard as it ever was.

    The biggest criticism I hear of self-published authors is that their books are full of typos and punctuation errors.
    Admittedly, too many traditionally published books these days are also chock-full of typos and punctuation errors. But here's the hard truth – as a self-published author, you will be judged more harshly by readers, overall, than those who are traditionally published.

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        Published: April 30th, 2012  Views: 13025 
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    As writers we constantly hear about ‘voice.’ Your voice is the way you say things, what you say, the way you present your story to the reader. It is your persona that shines through the words. Many readers can tell who the author of a book is by the way the book reads e.g. J.D. Robb’s Eve responds to adversity in quite a different way from a Gayle Wilson heroine. Whereas Eve punches her way through problems, solving them by putting herself in the perpetrator’s shoes, Gayle Wilson’s Susan (from Wednesday’s Child) or Sarah (from Victim) are more covertly intellectual. Susan and Sarah wait and agonize and wonder and eventually, when a clue is discovered, not necessarily by them, they take action. Eve is more likely to discover the clues herself and roar into action.
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        Published: April 30th, 2012  Views: 152 

    Congratulations to all Savvy Authors!

    Our first congratulations this week goes out to Savvy Authors member Char Chaffin. Her debut novel, Promises to Keep, is a finalist in NEC’s annual Beanpot Contest for Published Authors, in the Mainstream With Romantic Elements category. Congratulations, Char!

    Jenna Rutland signed her first contract with Entangled Publishing. Her contemporary category romance will be published through their Indulgence line with a Spring 2013 release. Congratulations, Jenna!

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        Published: April 28th, 2012  Views: 859 
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    Note: This is a big topic so I’m only touching on a few aspects.

    I’ve been writing historical fiction for well over 20 years and reading it for even longer. Some writers seem to avoid the history, except for the costumes and a minimal mention. Others research carefully and go into too much detail (info dumping). The ones I enjoy reading best steer a middle path between these extremes and give me a rich but still entertaining experience of life in the past. That’s not easy to do.

    How well can we fictionalize history anyway? Even though it’s how I earn my living, I often wonder about that. I’ll go through some of the main things I bear in mind when I write and then you can make up your own minds.

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        Published: April 26th, 2012  Views: 1086 
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    Recently I finished a different sort of project that I’ve been thinking about writing for years. The sense of accomplishment I felt when I typed THE END was immense. I did it! But there was something keeping me from the usual sense of relief and freedom I get when I hand in a book to my editor.

    I thought about it for quite a while before I understood why there were still some bits of me that didn’t feel quite like celebrating.

    For one thing, I learned a lot while writing this story and a good part of that was finding out what DIDN’T work rather than what did. I spent a lot of time looking for other ways to get across what I thought I needed to. Sometimes what I thought was important wasn’t. Sometimes I was in the wrong POV, I focused on the wrong plot line, or got the motivation wrong.
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        Published: April 26th, 2012  Views: 1170 
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    Conflict, action, resolution, emotion, and showing (versus telling) are the well-known critical elements to writing fiction. Emotion can be the trickiest part of life. It can also be the trickiest part of writing fiction. When a writer does it well the payoff is a reader identifies with the character, becomes the character and feels what the character feels. To do that, the author must get inside the character's head and feel what she feels, and then offer a glimpse of the character’s feelings and insecurities.

    If the character's emotions are not there, neither is the character.
    If the character isn't there, the reader isn’t there, and neither is the author in a way that satisfies.

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        Published: April 26th, 2012  Views: 799 
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    The clock is ticking and you can't find that document. Where is it? What did you name it? It's due now and you have to leave the house in five minutes for an appointment. You don't have time for seek and find.

    Does this scenario sound familiar? We've all been here, hunting like crazy, scrambling to track down a missing document or file. If we're lucky, we gave it a sensible name and can use the search function on the computer to locate it. If not, we're in for aggravation and headaches.

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        Published: April 25th, 2012  Views: 669 
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    The curse of a vivid imagination is that you can almost always imagine something that would make the situation worse. Strange noise in the middle of the night? Zombie apocalypse. Hacking cough and sniffle? No doubt the beginning of Ebola. It makes life anxious, but it’s great for writing fiction, and it’s even better for trying to amplify conflict.

    With every book and every scene I ask myself “what would make this worse?” If a character is going to discover that she has been betrayed, who is the person that she will be most hurt by? How can she discover this in the worst possible way, or at the worst possible time? What can the person say that would make this news feel even worse? Imagine a man telling his fiancé that he doesn’t think he can go through with the wedding. Now imagine him telling her in the back of the church just before the wedding, or worse yet, right after the ceremony. Maybe it’s even worse, he’s in love with her maid of honor, or her sister, or his best man.

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        Published: April 24th, 2012  Views: 381 
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    My writing ideas come from everywhere! They’re all around me, in front of me, and inside my head.

    For example, my third Pet Rescue Mystery HOUNDS ABOUND is an April release from Berkley Prime Crime. It features a very special pet sanctuary that takes in hard-to-adopt animals such as seniors and the disabled.

    How did I get that idea? I eavesdropped! Before I started plotting HOUNDS ABOUND, I was at a local grocery store when one of the staff, who was giving away tastes of featured foods, was talking to a customer. About what? Dogs and other pets. Since I do a lot of writing about animals, my ears perked up--as they often do when pets are the topic. Too bad mine don’t have as keen hearing as my own Cavalier King Charles Spaniels’ ears do.
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        Published: April 24th, 2012  Views: 788 
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    Private investigators typically specialize in one or more fields of expertise – for example, a PI might specialize in insurance investigations, accident reconstruction, background investigations, legal investigations or dozens of other fields. One of these specializations is finding missing persons, sometimes referred to as “skip tracing” or conducting “locates.”

    Note: The term "skip" comes from the idiomatic expression "to skip town," usually quickly, with few clues left behind as to their new location. The terms skip and locate were probably more distinct in the past (a bail bondsman might want to find a skip and an attorney to find a locate) but the terms have pretty much morphed into the same meaning these days.
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        Published: April 22nd, 2012  Views: 587 
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    Nine times in a four-month span, I’ve had people I’ve scheduled for the three websites I maintain not come through with their blogs. Then, I had to scramble and dip into my reserve of Emergency Blogs File to fill in the blanks.

    There’s an SOP for scheduling a blog: 1) Either I invite someone or they ask me. 2) I offer a choice of available dates; they select one, or if they aren’t choosy, I simply pick one for them. 3) Then, I explain the rules: I update the blogs every Friday. The article has to be in that writer’s file by the Wednesday before. All pictures must be jpgs. 4) They agree.

    Everything’s copasetic. Right?
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    1. Industry
    2. Writing Life
        Published: April 21st, 2012  Views: 755 
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    I recently gave a blogging class and on the evaluation form I was told “instructor (meaning me) used too much self promotion.” Too much? I thought back to what I did and yes, I did mention my upcoming workshops and a free open mic event. This negative prompted me to remember that I hear “Alice, I see you everywhere,” a lot. These comments made me think: am I promoting myself too much? Am I giving my audience “Alice fatigue”?

    I say no. If you want to be a successful artist in any capacity: recording, literary or visual you have to promote yourself or no one will know who you are. You do it to develop a following and fans. If not, no one will attend your showings or gigs; they won’t buy your books. The same goes for a blog: if you spend all of your time writing a blog and then don’t get others to follow you by promoting it, you’ve lost a lot of time and energy. Let’s take a look at John Denver’s self promotional success.
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        Published: April 20th, 2012  Views: 1659 
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    As authors, we’re always striving for ways to reach new readers. It’s a great idea to build your existing relationships with bloggers, reviewers and readers, but you also want to push outside the known and try new ideas that have the potential to expand your reach. I’ve included some here that I’ve tried. Some have worked better than others, but all have helped me achieve the goal of reaching new readers. The idea here isn’t to try these all at once, but challenge yourself to experiment with one a week or one a month, or whenever you have a few spare minutes (ha! I know… *winks*). New promotional ideas can help you generate buzz, reach new readers and kick start your sales.
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        Published: April 20th, 2012  Views: 1867 
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    I think it’s absurd that many authors think writing erotica is easy and, therefore, a lower class of writing. The truth is if writing erotica were easy, there would be no bad works of erotic fiction on the market. I can tell you from experience that writing good erotica is no simple task. And for those of you willing to take on the challenge of either writing erotica or an erotic version of your genre -- be it romance, suspense, or other genre -- here are seven secrets to make your sex scenes spicy.

    Warning: Spicy Content - The following article contains language that may be unsuitable for those under the age of 18.

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        Published: April 19th, 2012  Views: 902 
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    Thank you, Savvy Authors, for having me today! I’m really looking forward to chatting with everyone.

    Ever have a great idea, one that thumps you in the heart with excitement? And then in the next breath, you say to yourself, “That won’t work. No one does that in XYZ subgenre.” If so, you might find a bit of inspiration in my words below.

    From the first moment I decided to write a historical romance, I knew I wanted to push the bounds of the subgenre, and that knowledge scared the heck out of me. How far could I push the envelope for my writing to read fresh, rather than overboard? Would agents and editors share my desire to meet readers’ expectations and then take them to a dark place they never anticipated? Paranormal and romantic suspense do this all the time, but Regency-set historicals?

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        Published: April 19th, 2012  Views: 882 
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    Has an editor or agent ever suggested your story is episodic or has poor pacing? A lot of authors are puzzled by remarks like this in rejection letters because these problems are probably the most difficult to identify and fix in a manuscript. The writing technique or concept most likely at the root of this flaw is Scene and Sequel. And no, when I refer to sequel, I’m not talking about a follow-up movie or book in a series like Rocky or Harry Potter.

    Scene and Sequel is a topic that isn’t addressed often enough during craft workshops—perhaps because it’s something that should occur naturally with good story telling. Scenes are units of ACTION, where characters interact and events happen that impact them. Whereas, sequels are units of REACTION which result in decisions that will drive the next scene.
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        Published: April 18th, 2012  Views: 830 
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    I judge a lot of contests. Though not as many in the past (up to seven in one year), I judged one contest this year. I can’t tell you how many times I see the “telling” in stories instead of the more emotional-punch of showing. And you can tell the difference between a new writer and a seasoned writer by how they describe things and really use that “showing” to their advantage.

    I’m guilty of it, too. Sometimes I just get lazy as a writer and think, “Oh, I’ll go back and redo that later.” I’ve been trying to train myself to be a better first draft writer so the things I go back and edit are things that just need tweaking. This makes for a long first draft process but in the end, it makes a much cleaner draft to edit before shipping off to critique partners.
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        Published: April 18th, 2012  Views: 306 

    Congratulations to all Savvy Authors!

    Our first congratulations this week goes out to Savvy Authors member SJ Clarke. Her book, Mind Over Matter, is nominated for Best Romantic Suspense of 2011 at The Romance Reviews and has advanced as a finalist for the Colorado Romance Writers Award of Excellence for Best Romantic Suspense of 2011. Winners will be announced May 5th. Congratulations, SJ!

    Lori J. Schiele's book, Wiccan Shadows, was selected for the March 2012 Wisconsin Bookwatch. Congratulations, Lori!
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        Published: April 17th, 2012  Views: 455 
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    I live on the family farm, a riding stable in the Cascade foothills. I organize most of the riding programs, teach horsemanship around my day-job as a substitute teacher, nurse sick horses, hold for the shoer, train whoever needs it – four-legged and two-legged. And write mainstream western romances as Josie Malone for SirenBookStrand. I write young adult realistic fiction under what the kids at the barn call my “real name,” Shannon Kennedy for Black Opal.

    Writing what I know means horses show up in most of my books. Because it’s fiction, the horse never dies – unlike real life. According to my veterinarian, Dr. Tim Cavenaugh of All Creatures Great and Small up in Arlington, “We choose to love those who have a shorter life span than we do,” and I’ve lost my share of dearly beloved horses over the past forty years. Last March, my equine companion of almost twenty-four years, Lucky Lady died of cancer and I’m still grieving her.

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        Published: April 16th, 2012  Views: 564 
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    An artist friend of mine often rolls a piece of paper into a tube and looks through it at a spot on her painting-in-progress. She says it helps her to isolate a particular aspect of her painting, whether it be a tone or hue or whatever, and then to compare it to what’s around it. Separating it, she says, from the distraction of the surrounding parts lets her really see and analyze it. Only then can she determine whether it truly fits.

    I stumbled onto a writing exercise the other day that acted as a paper tube isolation device for me. Unfortunately, I can’t recall which book it was in at this moment, but the exercise was about finding your voice by uncomplicating the words you use. The task was to take a recent news event in my hometown and write a few paragraphs about it using one-syllable words only.

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