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First Person. Positive.

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I'm currently rewriting my NaNoWriMo novel from last year - Sea Fever.

At the time, I wrote it because the idea had been hanging around in my head for years, taking up valuable space, and I figured that if I just gave it a month is would be happy, satisfied, and leave me be. After all, it's a YA, paranormal murder mystery. I'm a contemporary women's fiction kind of a gal. It was just a fun side project for thirty days.

Fast forward eight months, and the situation's slightly different. With my agent turning down my latest women's fic offering, maybe it is time to look for something different. And heaven knows I needed something fun to work on for a while.

So I pulled out Sea Fever again. I did some more world building and research to beef it up. I started idly outlining sequels, making it the first in a series, although still a stand alone novel in its own right. I workshopped the characters, and their journeys.

I started the actual revision and...

... found it really needed to be in first person, not third.

It's a lot of work. The first draft had two POV characters; taking it down to one means I have to find a way to incorporate all the things that the second character saw and thought and felt into the Stella's narrative.

And, yes, I'm aware that Stella was supposed to get a roasting from Dylan yesterday. This is why that's delayed.

But it works better in Stella's first person POV. I'm only a couple of scenes in and I can see that already.

And I'm excited about the story. About all of it.

I'm writing on, but less calmly. And that's fine by me.

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  1. Danica Avet -
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    There is something fulfilling about working on a project you thought was intended to go one way and then realizing it was meant to be another way. I've done that with my last two manuscripts. I write it the way I originally plotted (or um, pantstered?) and then when I'm editing, I realize I'd gone about it all wrong. It wasn't meant to be that way and when I fix it with the new vision in mind...it's so much better! So...get to it! Revel in the joy of writing your new vision :)
  2. Venessa G -
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    We seem to have very similar things going on here. I'm also rewriting my Nano novel, which is a middle grade paranormal, and am also changing it from third person to first. I actually decided back in November it needed to be in first, so the last 1/4 or so is written in first person. I did not have the issue of having to condense multiple POVs, as I'd kept only to this char's POV to begin with.

    I'm finding that I'm having to do a double re-write. I'm going through the first pass changing the person, then going through again for more authentic voice. All my other writing is adult fiction, so this is somewhat challenging for me, but I'm enjoying it.

    Anyway, I just wanted to give a shout out, since our situations seem so similar!

    Best of luck :)
    VG
  3. Sophie Pembroke -
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    Thanks guys - all encouragement gratefully received!
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