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    Watercooler First Person... with Omniscient? Yay or Nay?

    My latest book has three POVs in it. The main antagonists (a married couple) and a South London dodgy dealer. But I noticed one kick-ass section in Ch1 that is omniscient. Is that a total no-no? Or if clearly separated, is it ok? But even if okay is it ill-advised? Genuine feedback is...
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    Watercooler Telling not Showing? In time-travel novel.

    I tweaked my first chapter after superb advice from a small publisher. I'm excited about my book (again) and looking forward to the next pitch event. I posted the chapter on a review site and had some great feedback. One reader suggested I make it more obvious in chapter one that the characters...
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    Intros & Newbies Hi from Wales

    Hello everyone, I'm new to this forum, so be gentle. :) I've written my first book - it's a gritty MG. More of a teen book really - I'd say between MG and YA, but hey ho. It's 88K words long, and I've used hashtags #DF, #FA #TT #MH The title is LORD RHYS AND THE DEVIL DOG. There's plenty of...